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As You Wish

Well, I am a rookie, but I had this story just clawing it's way out of me. Hope you all enjoy my first post. Maybe I'll give the "Rookie Challenge" a shot next time.

SMUT Challenge was my inspiration so it's A/O and NC17. And by the way it's exactly 230 words to boot.



As You Wish

Alex strode into the squad room and stood with arms crossed as she looked around.

“Where’s Detective Benson?”

Fin looked up from his paperwork “She’s up in the crib. Pulled an all-nighter on a new case – Dad had to promise her some hot KK’s before she’d go catch some shut-eye.”

“How long has she been up there?”

“’Bout an hour and a half – should be down soon. Why don’cha go on up?”

As Alex made her way up the stairs she let go the anger she was feeling over being stood-up for lunch. And getting Olivia’s voice-mail forced her to make this trip out of sheer worry. She needed to make sure her Liv was alright.

She slowly opened the door to the crib and shut it softly behind her. As she moved toward the figure on the cot she thought she detected jerky movements and moaning.

God she’s having a nightmare, poor baby.

“Ngh, God Alex!”

Woah, this is so not a nightmare! Oh my Lord – she’s… she’s…

“So close, baby! Please make me cum!”

“As you wish.”

And with that Alex slid her hand over Olivia’s and thrust two fingers into her. Olivia gasped and arched her back as Alex pushed and pulled the climax from her. Blue eyes locked with brown for an instant – and then Olivia’s world tilted – her scream of release muffled by Alex’s mouth.

Comments

( 8 comments — Leave a comment )
oxopinkpirateox
Jun. 25th, 2005 02:49 am (UTC)
ohoh
do more
like when she wakes up!
newbie_2u
Jun. 27th, 2005 06:28 pm (UTC)
Actually I had intended this to be a longer piece where Alex and Olivia were not yet a couple. Alex catches Olivia and freaks. Olivia is mortified. Drama and angst ensue... But I decided to give the Remainders Challenge a go and was limited to 230 words. I may still do the long version though. Thanks for the comment!
(Anonymous)
Jul. 13th, 2005 03:53 am (UTC)
WHOA that was amazing
OMG DO MORE PLEASE...and u should def make it what u were goin to do in the first place. You knw the whole Drama thing it would be good.....PLEASE DOO MORE
sea_sun70
Aug. 30th, 2005 09:13 pm (UTC)
PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP?
dawsonscreek05
Jul. 24th, 2006 06:41 am (UTC)
I loved the end!

'specially the "Blue eyes locked with brown for an instant – and then Olivia’s world tilted – her scream of release muffled by Alex’s mouth."

That was freakin awesome!
newbie_2u
Jul. 25th, 2006 01:37 pm (UTC)
Why thank you! <<>>
akte
Jun. 1st, 2007 04:43 am (UTC)
ok, i know I'm really slow, but i'm going back and tagging all the entries on alex_liv_lovers and found this story and OMG. SO HOT!!!

This is the first one that i've come across that i've loved so much I just *had* to comment :)
newbie_2u
Jun. 1st, 2007 01:52 pm (UTC)
Thanks! There are actually a few fairly spicy stories I posted on that LJ. Hope you enjoy the others!
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