Well, I am a rookie, but I had this story just clawing it's way out of me. Hope you all enjoy my first post. Maybe I'll give the "Rookie Challenge" a shot next time.
SMUT Challenge was my inspiration so it's A/O and NC17. And by the way it's exactly 230 words to boot.
As You Wish
Alex strode into the squad room and stood with arms crossed as she looked around.
“Where’s Detective Benson?”
Fin looked up from his paperwork “She’s up in the crib. Pulled an all-nighter on a new case – Dad had to promise her some hot KK’s before she’d go catch some shut-eye.”
“How long has she been up there?”
“’Bout an hour and a half – should be down soon. Why don’cha go on up?”
As Alex made her way up the stairs she let go the anger she was feeling over being stood-up for lunch. And getting Olivia’s voice-mail forced her to make this trip out of sheer worry. She needed to make sure her Liv was alright.
She slowly opened the door to the crib and shut it softly behind her. As she moved toward the figure on the cot she thought she detected jerky movements and moaning.
God she’s having a nightmare, poor baby.
“Ngh, God Alex!”
Woah, this is so not a nightmare! Oh my Lord – she’s… she’s…
“So close, baby! Please make me cum!”
“As you wish.”
And with that Alex slid her hand over Olivia’s and thrust two fingers into her. Olivia gasped and arched her back as Alex pushed and pulled the climax from her. Blue eyes locked with brown for an instant – and then Olivia’s world tilted – her scream of release muffled by Alex’s mouth.
SMUT Challenge was my inspiration so it's A/O and NC17. And by the way it's exactly 230 words to boot.
As You Wish
Alex strode into the squad room and stood with arms crossed as she looked around.
“Where’s Detective Benson?”
Fin looked up from his paperwork “She’s up in the crib. Pulled an all-nighter on a new case – Dad had to promise her some hot KK’s before she’d go catch some shut-eye.”
“How long has she been up there?”
“’Bout an hour and a half – should be down soon. Why don’cha go on up?”
As Alex made her way up the stairs she let go the anger she was feeling over being stood-up for lunch. And getting Olivia’s voice-mail forced her to make this trip out of sheer worry. She needed to make sure her Liv was alright.
She slowly opened the door to the crib and shut it softly behind her. As she moved toward the figure on the cot she thought she detected jerky movements and moaning.
God she’s having a nightmare, poor baby.
“Ngh, God Alex!”
Woah, this is so not a nightmare! Oh my Lord – she’s… she’s…
“So close, baby! Please make me cum!”
“As you wish.”
And with that Alex slid her hand over Olivia’s and thrust two fingers into her. Olivia gasped and arched her back as Alex pushed and pulled the climax from her. Blue eyes locked with brown for an instant – and then Olivia’s world tilted – her scream of release muffled by Alex’s mouth.
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like when she wakes up!
'specially the "Blue eyes locked with brown for an instant – and then Olivia’s world tilted – her scream of release muffled by Alex’s mouth."
That was freakin awesome!
This is the first one that i've come across that i've loved so much I just *had* to comment :)